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Hola Indigo, I really like the ship that you made. It's really creative! I think you could add a bit more on how you made your ship and what made you come up with the design. What was your favourite part about making this ship?
Hi Indigo my name is Reihana and what I like about your blog is your information about New Zealand. I also like watching national things like the New Zealand rowing team.What you can improve on is being more discriptive. What was your favourite thing about making your ship on google drawing?
Kia Ora Inigo! I'm Kelsey, a year six student attending Ahipara school. I really like how you included the NZ flag on your ship and how you also included the kiwi picture, it does a good job at representing NZ. Maybe next time you could try and make it not so cluttered. Also how did you get the birds in the sky to look like that?
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ReplyDeleteHola Indigo, I really like the ship that you made. It's really creative! I think you could add a bit more on how you made your ship and what made you come up with the design.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your favourite part about making this ship?
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ReplyDeleteHi Indigo my name is Reihana and what I like about your blog is your information about New Zealand. I also like watching national things like the New Zealand rowing team.What you can improve on is being more discriptive. What was your favourite thing about making your ship on google drawing?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Inigo! I'm Kelsey, a year six student attending Ahipara school. I really like how you included the NZ flag on your ship and how you also included the kiwi picture, it does a good job at representing NZ. Maybe next time you could try and make it not so cluttered. Also how did you get the birds in the sky to look like that?
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